I adjusted and moved around certain elements of my front cover page due to my audience feedback. By doing this I think has improved my magazine significantly, it now looks more professional and the conventions look clearer to my audience for example my feature stories are more spread apart so my audience will be able to tell them apart from others.
I also changed certain elements of my contents page due to the feedback I received on my previous contents page. I've added more images to go with other feature stories so this page looks more professional. I changed the format of my feature section on the right so the page numbers are going down the right side of the section, this made my contents page look neater and made it easier for my audience to read. I've added anchorage to the bottom left of this page to go with the article I wrote on the artists Massi. I also move the text 'Content' onto the text 'HHR' so I had more room to place more images for feature stories.
The feedback I got on my previous double page spread was to improve my pull quotes and to add anchorage. So I did this by changing the font of my pull quote to 'Impact' so it stood out more to my audience. I also added anchorage to the side of the image of Massi which is another pull quote from the interview I wrote between HHR and Massi.
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